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It's amazing to watch you wither away and die slowly as your mind explodes softly. It's horrible too though.
It's horrible when I call it amazing. But how can I not?
It is what it is and there's nothing I can do.

Age is your enemy, I can see. It's led you to glassy eyes and faded smiles and you're so confused but everyone calls you the wisest ever alive. Even though you're not. You're not. You forgot your memories and your tribulations and errors when all your friends passed away. Pity too, because your advice would mean a lot. A lot to me.
But the tempest of your mind controls your thoughts and words. All your voice does is add dust to the wind.

It's rather disappointing.

Never really liked my Grandmothers.
Never really knew my Grandfathers.













. . . .

Don't even think about stealing this.
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jdoem Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013   Traditional Artist
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Mischievous-Eyes Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013   General Artist
:heart: :huggle:
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jdoem Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013   Traditional Artist
:D
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roadkillKitten Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
Wow, this is a powerful and moving piece. Your word choice is very descriptive and adds to the mood of the work. Nicely done!

(I never considered stealing someone's work, then you mentioned it, then I thought: what if I DID think of it, but said I was thinking of something else....?) *ducks the blow to my head*
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Mischievous-Eyes Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012   General Artist
Thanks so much! :heart:


I'd call you a LIAR and then shoot you. :meow:

:XD:
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roadkillKitten Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
You're welcome!!!

I call "shields"!!!!
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ClintFrancisBarton Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful. I love it! Reminds me of my grandfather who had Alzeimer's and probably didn't remember me.
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Mischievous-Eyes Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012   General Artist
Thank you so much! :aww:
Yeah? Who knows, he might have remembered you. It just might have not seemed like it from the surface. :]
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LadyIgnis Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student Writer
This is really pretty :D
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Mischievous-Eyes Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012   General Artist
Thank you! :aww:
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